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Feb. 9th, 2008 | 04:37 pm
posted by: jeyhawk in jey_creations

The changed outline got a bit confusing (the original doc is color coded) and I wanted to get a better overview. So I put together a more finalized outline for what I want to write.



PART ONE

One

1. Jared and Harley meeting Sadie. Something chasing them in the woods. Jared ex military, carries gun (Smith & Wesson 38 Chief's Special). Harley shelter dog. From Santa Barbara to Santiago Canyon. Pacific to the right. Pines.

2. Jared, Harley and Sadie making it to the car and escaping.

Two

1. Jensen being nervous about Banodyne. Having a bad feeling about things. A little of his past history with the evil aunt revealed.

2. Jared washing Sadie. She proves again that she's smart. Collar suspicion.

3. Jensen has a feeling he's being watched.

Three

1. Jared debating with Sadie whether she's something special or not. She gets him a cold beer. Making a question mark out of crackers.

2. More Jensen back story.

3. Jared telling Sadie the story of his life. The army, kicked out at twenty five, the damaged knee, the payment to keep silent.

4. Jensen hopes that wherever Sadie is, she's okay.

5. Jared going to bed. Sadie worried about the monster.

Four

1. Jensen going out for a walk to avoid the house. Creep finds him and says he's going to move in. Jensen is accosted by a man with a gun that is trying to get him to come with somewhere.

2. Sadie (and Harley) saves Jensen from the killer. Gives Jensen his number. Jensen recognizes Sadie. Tells Jared to take her and run. He'll explain later.

3. Jensen calls Jared, but chickens out before he can talk to him.

4. Sadie forces Jared to call Jensen through various and sundry means. Sadie decides they need to visit Jensen ASAP.

5. Jared kills the hired killer out to take Jensen's life. Gives Jensen the gun tells him to say he shot the guy in self defence.

Five

1. Jensen learns that Banodyne burned down to the ground. Fears for his life. Meets up with Jared and tells him a little about Sadie.

2. Chris and Chad NSA agents arrive at the scene of the crime. (The old guy getting killed.) Talks with the county sheriff, Steve. Marine practice, bullshit. What killed the man. National security. Steve onto the truth about Banodyne.

3. Jensen calls Jared in the middle of the night, scared that someone is trying to get inside his house. Jared takes him home.

4. Chris and Steve argue at the hospital over interviewing the girl. Steve has some theories. Chris thinks about the Outsider following the dog. Remember to mention the zoo where a bunch of animals got killed.

Six

1. Last week of May and first week of June, Jared and Jensen hangs out all the time. Jared makes Jensen get a haircut, buys him clothes. They have dinner. Jared takes Jensen to see his lawyer. They know they'll have to run eventually and Jared wants to make preparations. They're yet unaware of the Outsider, but Sadie is worried.

2. Second, third June. Jared and Jensen works with Sadie. Sadie shows them pictures and they try to connect.

3. Chris arrives at the scene of the killed cops, Steve upset. Chris tells him the story of the genetic research that led to the development of Sadie. The Outsider…

4. Steve POV. Chris tells the story about the Outsider and the fact that some is sabotaging the project. Possible mention that Jensen is suspected killed or has gone underground after the last attempt at his life.

5. The Outsider left one of the policemen's head for Chris. Eyes missing. Thinks it's ugly, horrendous. Steve thinks it truly feels as an Outsider.

Seven

1. In a roundabout way Jensen takes up his research and starts teaching Sadie to read. Jared worries a little that his interest in Sadie is mainly scientific.

2. Summer passes. Sadie learns to read. Sadie tells them about the Outsider.

3. 15th of July. Chris hasn't heard anything from the outsider in a long while. New killings. They find a cave where the Outsider's been living for a long time. Mickey Mouse connection. Only happy thing that happened in captivity.

4. Something makes them decide it's time to take a trip, maybe they go out for the night and when they come back the house is torn to shreds and someone is dead inside. The Outsider found them. Jared goes up against it, and they manage to escape.

5. Jared and Jensen visits Jeff (the lawyer) that cares for them and helps them runaway. They visit the lawyer to set about liquidating their assets.

6. Chris and partner go through Jared's house. Delta Force. They find pics of Jensen and wonders if he was in on it all along.

7. Jared and Jensen get to San Francisco where Jared gets them new identities. Jensen is a bit upset about his new persona. When he's no longer a doctor he doesn't know who he is. Jared mistakes his feelings for something else.

8. Jared comes up with a way to really communicate with Sadie by using Scrabble letters. Sadie tells them full story about the Outsider.

PART TWO

Eight

1. (21st of October)Jared and Jensen settle down in a house somewhere closer to Santa Barbara than they intended. (Carmel) They created a fort, wanting a confrontation with the outsider. Pining for each other. Jared is still slightly worried that Jensen wants to do some sort of huge thing on Sadie.

2. Thanksgiving. Sadie coughs and sneezes a little. They're not worried. They come close to some sort of revelation about their feelings during dinner.

3. Chris tries to track down Jared and Jensen through Jeff, who's not about to start talking any time soon.

4. Sadie still a bit sick.

5. Jeff manages to get away from the NSA agents following him and calls Jared and Jensen from someone's house. Chris is amazed by the loyalty the dog inspires. Thinks about his own life.

Nine

1. Sadie very sick in the middle of the night.

2. Sadie at the vets. Valpsjuka. Second stage brain damage? Jared and Jensen help out at the vets. Why is Jensen called Jen when his name is Dean? Sadie gets worse. Cramps. J2 help the vet out again. Keeps watch over Sadie. Harley heartbroken. Jared kisses Jensen.

3. Sadie wakes up. They try talking to her, but she doesn't respond. How long? Weeks, maybe months. Bobby tells them he knows that Sadie is wanted. Cancer research. They tell him the truth. Sadie still smart. Bobby happy. The boys come close to having sex for the first time. Jared's no longer worried that Jensen cares only for the results. Realizes that Sadie was the closest to a friend Jensen had during his lonely years.

Ten

1. They get back home. Bobby doesn't want to let them go. Sadie is all worried. Can no longer feel the Outsider for real. They have sex.

2. Sadie getting better. Bobby comes for a visit. Thinks he can remove Sadie's tattoo. Sadie feels a great darkness.

3. Christmas. Good times to be had by all. Bobby visits with his dog. Sex.

4. Tom finds Jensen. Threatens to kill him. Wants the dog. Tells Jensen the whole story. Sadie upset. Jared baking cookies. Jensen gets his chance and tries to kill Tom. Jared shot. Jared kills Tom. Jensen patches him up. Outsider arrives, almost kills Sadie. Jared and Jensen argues about who stays with him. Jared chases after the Outsider. Kills it.

Eleven

1. Chris visits Jared and Jensen. Jared tells the story. Shows the Outsider. Won't tell them where Sadie is buried. Jeff and Bobby… ;0)

2. Chris and Steve talks about the dog that they think Jared and Jensen are harbouring. They got their happy ever after.

3. A few years later. Harley and Sadie have special puppies. :0P Jared and Jensen are happy. Adopted. :0) Have a dog training school, or something like it, using Sadie's and Jensen's smarts to make good things happen.

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